AMONG THE MILLET
Since the publication of Archibald Lampman's poems last year, there has been no truth in the assertion so frequently made that Canada has never produced a great poet. Minor poets we have with us always. Their thin volumes, appearing with the regularity and frequency of the seasons, are almost invariably marked with poetic fancy and feeling, expressed with refined taste. Occasionally, by happy accident, there is a note of pure inspiration that faints and falls to earth in the next page or in the next stanza. There are much be-praised books of Canadian verse that fall short even of this that are merely models of mechanical excellence in thought and feeling, as in print and binding. The ordinary emotions, fears, loves, griefs, desires and regrets of humanity are correctly, even beautifully, expressed, but the hard heart of the reviewer is touched not by what is done well that is common enough but by what is done superlatively, unapproachably, miraculously well. The poem that most men would wish to have written, that only one man could have written, that is the truly great poem; and not all the trumpetings of the press, nor the fervors of admiring friends, nor acceptance by leading periodicals, nor the praise of the great and gifted has ever purchased immortality for a bit of verse, or a book of verses, that had not in itself the spiritual seeds of eternal life. "I will show you," says Holmes, "that rhyming's as easy as lying,"1 and the proof of this is shown in the repetition, in almost every review of mediocre poetry, of such phrases as "remarkable facility," "very gracefully written," "master of a charmingly easy and fluent style." The aspiring poet, having, in common with the rest of humanity, some capacity for describing beautiful objects, for expressing his feelings, and particularly for setting forth that he is having a harder time of it in this world than the dull clods about him, has but to manifest these capacities in verse when he is spoken of in print as displaying deep poetic feeling, great susceptibility to the beauties of nature, and the soul-sadness that inevitably marks the artistic temperament. Indeed it is a difficult matter for any one who knows how to read and write and rhyme to produce a volume of verses bad enough to escape praise. Critics have thrust their rough fingers among the heartstrings of true poets and wrought them incalculable injury in times gone past, but not since the invention of a number of pleasantly-worded, non-committal phrases, which are intended to deceive the innocent rhymer, and which make no impression on a public too long familiar with their meaninglessness. It is because readers have grown rightfully incredulous of the value of adjectival admiration that reviewers, who have faith in the author under consideration, are compelled to turn their backs on the crowd of high-pitched and hard-worked superlatives, for such cases made and provided, and set forth their impressions in the plain language of truth and soberness. The qualities which make Mr.Lampman not only greatest among Canadian poets, but one whom any nation might be proud to own, are, first of all, sincerity; next, the ability to see infinitude in common things, and then a noble ability to convey his impressions melodiously, clearly and accurately. Of his sincerity, his utter freedom from affectations, it is only necessary to open his book at any page to find proof. Here, for instance, where "through the long sweetness of an April day," he Wandered with happy feet, and quite forgot The shallow toil, the strife against the grain, Near souls that hear us call and answer not, The loneliness, perplexity and pain, And high thoughts cankered with an earthly strain, And then, the long draught emptied to the lees, I turn me homeward in slow-pacing ease, Cleaving the cedar shadows and the thin Mist of grey gnats that cloud the river shore, Sweet, even choruses, that dance and spin Soft tangles in the sunset; and once more The city smites me with its dissonant roar, To its hot heart I pass, untroubled, yet Fed with calm hope, without desire or fret. So to the year's first altar-step I bring Gifts of meek song, and make my spirit free With the blind working of unanxious spring, Careless with her, whether the days that flee Pale drouth or golden fruited plenty see; So that we toil, brothers, without distress, In calm-eyed peace and god-like blamelessness. 2 In another and darker mood of the poet's mind there is the same entire absence of strain, and fever, and exaggeration. Mark the absolute honesty of the second line: Here I will wait a little; I am weary, Not torn with pain of any lurid hue, But only still, and very grey and dreary, Sweet, sombre lands, like you. 3 The fruits of sincerity are quietness, steadiness, a deliberate choice of ordinary every-day words, as deliberate an avoidance of quaint fancies and far-fetched conceits all expressed as much as possible in compound adjectives and stilted phrases. Here are lines that wear the unconscious beauty and nobility of a Greek statue:
The same thought is pursued in part of "An Athenian Reverie":
This is not preaching. It is a simple and noble expression of the grandest spiritual truth that underlies our sordid lives. Mr. Lampman puts a sensitive conscience into every line of his work. He is absolutely faithful to what he has seen and felt. The utmost precision of scientific statement could not make so definite an impression on the mind as the poetic accuracy of these lines:
Or of these:
Always with this miracle-working touch of the imagination there is a clean grasp of the facts. Sometimes there is a succession of clear-cut statements, each one giving indispensable aid to the completion of a picture that receives its finishing touch in the last line. How admirable is the picture of November thus presented:
With this must be given a spring picture, very beautiful by sheer force of its ideal truthfulness to fact:
There is real substance and satisfaction in such poems as these. They are wholly free from pretence and artificiality. The thought is invariably finer than the words that clothe it. The book is charged with reality, and it fails not to teach the poet's indestructible lesson to mankind:
Not that "Among the Millet" is entirely free from sadness. That is the disease of the age, and the sensitive mind of the poet must reflect the environment in which he lives. Any one who is able to "recapture the first fine careless rapture" of life may cast the first stone. 11The rest of us will find between the dull-red covers of this most important volume of Canadian verse food for thought and inspiration in a generation that is distinctly not given to thoughtfulness, and that is not inspiring. The common sweet realities of life as it is every day, of nature as it is almost everywhere, will be made dearer to us by reason of the services of this most observant, most exact and most sympathetic of interpreters. Mr. Lampman shall not suffer at our hands the injustice of over-praise. It was on the tip of the critical pen to say that the uplifting sound caused by the rushing wings of the imagination was not always audible "Among the Millet." But the fancy is immediately contradicted by the far-reaching suggestiveness of "An Impression":
And as if this were not enough, the very spirit of the storm is caught and chained in the poem of that name, and the human spirit leaps to meet it in the concluding stanzas:
"Among the Millet," by Archibald Lampman. (J. Durie & Sons, Ottawa. ) Notes to the Review All page references given
here for the poems or passages from poems quoted by Thomson apply to Among the Millet (Ottawa:
J. Dune and Son, 1888). Line references are to the numbers of the lines
quoted, not their numbers in the complete poems. "An Impression", p. 9.[back] "Storm", stanzas 8 ,9 ,10, and 11, pp. 36-37. AM has "strangely" for "strongly" (1. 13).[back] |