Appendix
These
notes record all editorial emendations in the present
text to the first edition of The Emigrant. Each
entry contains the reading of the present text before
the “]” and the reading of the first edition
after the “]”. Thus “IV, 145
other’s ] others” indicates that in line 145
of Chapter IV an apostrophe has been added in the present
text where there is none in the first edition. “(E.)”
indicates emendations made on the basis of the errata
slip in The Emigrant, and Other Poems.
|
LEAVING
HOME
|
I. |
He
asks his companion to sit down with him while he
recounts the story of his journey from the fatherland. |
II. |
He moralizes
on the changes of fifty years. |
III. |
He recalls
the friends who met to bid him farewell. |
IV. |
It was
a morning in spring when all nature, though beautiful,
seemed to have an air of sympathetic sadness. |
V. |
His
grandfather comes to give him his blessing. |
VI. |
The
grandfather's parting counsel. |
|
THE JOURNEY
|
I. |
He describes
the motley company on the ship. |
II. |
The
teacher, the preacher, the mechanic, the politician,
etc. |
III. |
When
the sea is calm they tell each other their story. |
IV. |
Tom's
song: “Old England is eaten by knaves.” |
V. |
Mac's
song: “Farewell! Caledonia.” |
|
THE ARRIVAL
|
I. |
The
journey through the woods; camping at night. |
II. |
They
sing in praise of rural life: “The Greenwood
Shade.” |
III. |
After
rest on bare ground they struggle through a swamp. |
IV. |
In a
forest of maples and beeches they find birds of
beauteous hue, but devoid of song. |
V. |
Bill
from Kent shoots a deer. |
VI. |
The
dead hind. |
VII. |
They
reach the promised land. The poet pauses to reflect
on his departed companions, all gone but himself. |
|
CUTTING THE FIRST TREE
|
I. |
The
tent raised on a point of land jutting into the
lake. |
II. |
A duck,
a crane, a stag, take alarm and flee. |
III. |
The
first attempt to fell an elm. [Page 112] |
IV. |
Lazy
Bill despairs of success. |
V. |
The
fall of the tree. |
VI. |
Their
rejoicing. |
VII. |
The
orator's exulting speech. |
VIII. |
Doubting
John prepares to speak. |
IX. |
He tells
a parable in favor of co-operation. |
|
THE LOG CABIN
|
|
The
poet describes its solitary situation and surroundings.
|
I. |
The
Summer's work. |
II. |
Autumn
and Indian Summer. |
III. |
Visits
of wolves. |
IV. |
Amusements
of Winter. |
V. |
Little
Mac's song: “I ask not for Fortune.” |
VI. |
The
applause of the listeners. |
VII. |
The
hunter's song: “The Indian Maid.” |
VIII. |
Tales
told by the old. |
IX. |
Ballad:
“The Gipsy King.” |
|
THE INDIAN BATTLE
|
I. |
Lazy
Bill announces the onset of the Mohawks. |
II. |
Commotion
among the settlers. |
III. |
Muster
of the fighting men. |
IV. |
March
to a little height where the attack is awaited.
Sounds of a struggle in the woods. Then silence.
A scout announces that two tribes are fighting. |
V. |
The
chiefs agree to settle the quarrel by single combat. |
VI. |
Description
of “Eagle.” |
VII. |
Description
of “Hemlock.” |
VIII. |
The
combat. Victory of “Eagle” and scalping
of “Hemlock.” |
IX. |
The
Hurons carry off their dead chief. [Page
113] |
|
DONALD BAN
|
I. |
The
Highland hunter with the spirit of an ancient bard,
who loves to commune with Nature and peer into her
mysteries. |
II. |
Destruction
of the old home of his race, and banishment from
his native land. |
III. |
Solace
in playing the pipes. |
IV. |
Song
of the exile: “Why Left I my Country.” |
V. |
The
death of his wife and son leave him alone with his
hound. |
VI. |
He becomes
blind. |
VII. |
He wanders
with his hound for guide, playing the pipes for
youths and maidens to dance to. |
VIII. |
Return
to his cabin in Autumn. |
IX. |
His
song: “The Old Highland Piper.” |
X. |
On his
death-bed his wandering mind reverts to the scenes
of his youth. |
XI. |
His
death. |
XII. |
Parting
address of the poet to his dead friend. |
XIII. |
Au
revoir. |
INTRODUCTION.
] INTRODUCTION: APOSTROPHE TO CANADA
2 |
the
winter’s ] stern Winter’s |
3 |
the
summer’s ] warm Summer’s |
4 |
the
winter’s ] old Winter’s |
5 |
the
autumn’s ] mild Autumn’s |
7 |
tempest
] Tempest |
8 |
north;
] north |
9 |
wrath,
] wrath |
11 |
cataract
stupendous, ] Cataract stupendous |
13 |
nature,
] Nature |
14 |
stature;
] stature— |
16 |
boar;
] boar— |
17 |
oak,
] oak |
19 |
steering;
] steering, |
22 |
axe
resounding; ] ax resounding,— [Page
114] |
27 |
tradition,
tale, nor song, ] traditions, tales, nor song |
29 |
sages,
] sages |
30 |
to ]
on |
31 |
by,
] by |
32 |
warlike
panoply; ] war-like panoply. |
33 |
done,
] done |
36 |
lonely
solitudes; ] desert solitudes, |
37 |
given,
] given |
38 |
redeemed
] redeem'd |
39 |
land,
] land |
40 |
hand;
] hand? |
41 |
seen,
] seen |
45 |
every
where, ] ev’rywhere— |
47 |
pen,
and ] pen and |
49 |
wandering
] wand'ring |
50 |
settlement;
] settlement. |
52 |
whispering
near, ] whisp’ring near; |
54 |
All
the world ] Mother Nature |
CHAPTER I. LEAVING HOME. ] LEAVING HOME
I,
2 |
gray
moss overgrown; ] grey moss overgrown, |
I,
3 |
and
we’ll . . . past, ] While we . . . past,— |
I,
4 |
last,
] last |
I,
5 |
simple
hardy race, ] simple, hardy race |
I,
9 |
desolation’s
] Desolation’s |
I,
11 |
rolled
] roll’d |
I,
12 |
manifold;
] manifold, |
I,
14 |
And
came a young adventurer here; ] Came, a young adventurer,
here. |
I,
15 |
fortune
wears, ] Fortune wears |
I,
16 |
years,
] years; |
I,
19 |
Oh ]
Oh, |
I,
19 |
crossed
] crost |
I,
20 |
death,
] death! |
I,
21 |
Men
] Men, [Page 115] |
I,
22 |
away,
] away! |
I,
23 |
schools,
] schools! |
I,
24 |
fools.
] fools! |
I,
26 |
sky;
] sky— |
I,
28 |
away.
] away! |
I,
29 |
passed
] pass’d |
I,
31 |
left
at fortune’s ] left, at Fortune’s |
I,
32 |
fatherland
and all; ] Fatherland and all. |
I,
33 |
boy,
] boy; |
I,
34 |
Earth
. . . joy; ] Earth, . . . joy. |
I,
35 |
gray
] grey |
I,
36 |
yesterday;
] yesterday. |
I,
37 |
Every
. . . back, ] Ev’ry . . . back |
I,
38 |
track;
] track: |
I,
39 |
Friends
. . . true hearted, ] Friends, . . . true-hearted, |
I,
40 |
with
death departed; ] in death departed, |
I,
43 |
spring,
] spring; |
I,
46 |
wi'
its drap o'dew ] with its drop of dew |
I,
48 |
vale;
] vale. |
I,
49 |
Ah
. . . were ] Ah! . . . were, |
I,
50 |
silent
. . . speak; ] silent, . . . speak— |
I,
51 |
seemed
. . . knew, ] seem'd . . . knew |
I,
52 |
I came
] I’d come |
I,
53 |
we’d
] we had |
I,
54 |
tear,
] tear. |
I,
55 |
voice,
] voice— |
I,
56 |
not
as of old ] not, as of old, |
I,
59 |
For
. . . tie, ] For, . . . tie— |
I,
60 |
strange
mysterious sympathy, ] strange, mysterious sympathy— |
I,
63 |
power,
] pow’r |
I,
64 |
every
. . . flower ] ev’ry . . . flow’r |
I,
66 |
opening
] op’ning |
I,
67 |
tassels
] tassels, |
I,
68 |
listened
] listen’d |
I,
70 |
towering
in the blue, ] tow’ring in the blue— |
I,
71 |
wears,
] wears [Page 116] |
I,
73 |
loved
. . . gray ] lov’d . . . grey |
I,
74 |
not
like man’s works away; ] not, like man’s
works, away, |
I,
76 |
air;
] air. |
I,
80 |
them;
] them? |
I,
81 |
And
seated ] High seated |
I,
84 |
revelled
] revel’d |
I,
85 |
seemed
] seem’d |
I,
86 |
all
] sad |
I,
87 |
There
are things in memory ] Things there are in mem’ry |
I,
88 |
forget,
] forget. |
I,
91 |
gray,
] grey |
I,
92 |
Blessed
be his memory, ] (Blessèd be his memory), |
I,
94 |
be blest
. . . went. ] did bless . . . went: |
I,
95-198 |
These
lines are given the title A Grandfather’s
Blessing in PW. |
I,
95 |
“Your
] Your |
I,
96 |
ending,
] ending— |
I,
97 |
Thou’rt
] You’re |
I,
99 |
thee
] you |
I,
101 |
O my
son ] Oh, my son! |
I,
102 |
thee
] you |
I,
103 |
“I’ve
seen in three score ] I’ve seen, in threescore |
I,
105 |
fortune’s
face, ] Fortune’s face |
I,
107 |
learned
. . . caught, ] learn’d . . . caught |
I,
108 |
bridle,
] bridle; |
I,
111 |
“While
. . . thy hopeful heart, ] While . . . your hopeful
heart |
I,
113 |
all
. . . leave, ] all, . . . leave |
I,
114 |
reverses;
] reverses. |
I,
115 |
Should’st
thou ] Should you |
I,
116 |
thee
] you |
I,
119 |
“Men
] Men |
I,
120 |
hurl’d
] hurled |
I,
121 |
thine
] your |
I,
122 |
world;
] world. |
I,
123 |
Should’st
thou be poor ] Should you be poor, |
I,
124 |
neglected,
] neglected; |
I,
125 |
lift
. . . ere I got, ] lift . . . e’er I got [Page
117] |
I,
127 |
“Grieve
] Grieve |
I,
128 |
Though
. . . distressing, ] Tho’ . . . distressing?— |
I,
129 |
mixed
. . . every ] mixt . . . ev’ry |
I,
130 |
every
] ev’ry |
I,
131 |
height,
] height; |
I,
132 |
withheld,
] withheld |
I,
134 |
“Look
fate and fortune ] Look Fate and Fortune |
I,
135 |
merit,
] merit; |
I,
136 |
earth,
] earth |
I,
137 |
spirit;
] spirit. |
I,
141 |
faint-hearted
] faint-hearted, |
I,
143 |
“Hope
. . . earth, ] Hope . . . earth |
I,
144 |
for,
] for; |
I,
145 |
mouth,
]mouth |
I,
146 |
flavour;
] flavor. |
I,
147 |
thou
wilt ] you will |
I,
148 |
nature
. . . thee, ] Nature . . . you: |
I,
149 |
thine
] your |
I,
150 |
who
. . . thee ] that . . . you |
I,
151 |
“Strive
. . . every ] Strive . . . ev’ry |
I,
153 |
clean
hands and an upright heart ] hands unstain’d,
with heart upright |
I,
155 |
thou
art ] you are |
I,
156 |
affectation,
] affectation; |
I,
157 |
thou
art truth’'s thou sitt'st ] you are truth’s,
you sit |
I,
159 |
“Be
. . . right, ] Be . . . right |
I,
160 |
scripture
] Scripture |
I,
161 |
heaven
] heav’n |
I,
164 |
troubles,
] troubles; |
I,
165 |
rock
] rocks |
I,
166 |
To give
but birth ] And give birth but |
I,
167 |
“They
] They |
I,
169 |
hopeless
] hopeless, |
I,
171 |
knowledge,
] knowledge— |
I,
172 |
gather,
] gather— |
I,
175 |
“There’s
] There’s |
I,
176 |
Which
. . . college, ] That . . . college; [Page
118] |
I,
178 |
knowledge.
] knowledge! |
I,
181 |
hearts,
] hearts |
I,
183 |
“If
] If |
I,
185 |
the
world o’er ] o’er all the world |
I,
187 |
breast,
] breast |
I,
188 |
blossom,
] blossom; |
I,
191 |
“Farewell,
. . . more, ] Farewell! . . . more; |
I,
193 |
ripe
. . . come, ] ripe, . . . come |
I,
194 |
And
] To |
I,
195 |
Farewell,
. . . height ] Farewell! . . . height, |
I,
198 |
grandsire.”
] grandsire. |
CHAPTER II.
THE JOURNEY. ] THE JOURNEY
II,
1 |
“Edward
Thorn,” ] Edward Thorn |
II,
2 |
We were
o’er the billows borne, ] O’er the billows
we were borne. |
II,
4 |
weary
] dreary |
II,
8 |
restlessness,
] restlessness; |
II,
10 |
why,
] why. Lines 9-10 appear as lines 11-12 in PW. |
II,
11 |
longed
] long’d |
II,
12 |
promised
. . . liberty. ] promis’d . . . liberty; Lines
11-12 appear as lines 9-10 in PW. |
II,
13 |
John
] John, |
II,
14 |
the
preacher, ] “the preacher,” |
II,
15 |
General
] Gen’ral |
II,
16 |
Lean
] Lean, |
II,
18 |
singer.
] singer; |
II,
19 |
There
. . . Aleck ] And there . . . Aleck, |
II,
20 |
Bristly
. . . porcupine. ] As bristly . . . porcupine; |
II,
21 |
There
] And there |
II,
22 |
Always
upon . . . bent, [ Who always was on . . . bent; |
II,
23 |
Wives
and children ] With wives and children, |
II,
24 |
maidens
. . . score, ] maidens, . . . score; |
II,
25 |
lastly
] lastly, |
II,
26 |
alone.
] alone— [Page 119] |
II,
29 |
asleep
] asleep, |
II,
30 |
This
line, which is repeated at II, 33, has been replaced
by “Hush’d their wild and restless sweep,”
in PW. |
II,
33 |
deep,
] deep |
II,
34 |
sea
god . . . asleep, ] sea-god . . . asleep; |
II,
35 |
hang
. . . deck ] stroll . . . deck, |
II,
36 |
wreck,
] wreck; |
II,
37 |
Others
] Others, |
II,
38 |
Talked
of . . . loved ] Mourn’d . . . lov’d |
II,
39 |
Or told
the . . . deep ] Told that . . . dire |
II,
40 |
Of hungry,
hopeless, ] Hungry, hopeless |
II,
41 |
Which
made ] Made |
II,
42 |
To seek
a home ] Seeking homes |
II,
43 |
to singing
] a-singing |
II,
44 |
said
. . . heart ] said, . . . heart; |
II,
45 |
boisterous
vein ] boist’rous vein, |
II,
46 |
strain.
] strain |
II,
47-70 |
In PW
Tom’s song is given the title Old
England is Eaten by Knaves. |
II,
48 |
core,
] core; |
II,
50 |
Nor
a ] May no |
II,
52 |
both,
] both; |
II,
54 |
Where
there’s . . . broth. ] With . . . broth? |
II,
55 |
squire’s
. . . game. ] Squire is . . . game— |
II,
56 |
him,
] him— |
II,
57 |
poor
] poor, |
II,
59 |
Justice
] Justice, |
II,
60 |
secure,
] secure; |
II,
61 |
But
has . . . his wig, ] With . . . “his wig,” |
II,
64 |
birth,
] birth; |
II,
70 |
Nor
a ] May no |
II,
71 |
lays,
] lays |
II,
72 |
braes,
] braes: |
II,
73 |
hills
. . . streams ] hill . . . stream |
II,
74 |
lone
rocks where the eagle screams; ] lonely rock where
eagles scream, [Page 120] |
II,
75 |
banks
. . . glens ] bank, . . . glen |
II,
76 |
knowes
. . . dens ] knowe, . . . den |
II,
77 |
burnsides
. . . lay, ] burnside, . . . lay |
II,
78 |
lee
lang . . . day, ] lee lang . . . day— |
II,
79 |
song,
] song |
II,
80 |
throng;
] throng. |
II,
81 |
we .
. . tale, ] I . . . tale |
II,
82 |
every
] ev’ry |
II,
83 |
thrilled
my heart . . . ago, ] thrill’d our hearts
. . . ago. |
II,
85 |
And
. . . hung, ] As . . . hung |
II,
86 |
Sadly
sighing as he sung; ] The sigh from many a breast
was wrung, |
II,
87 |
And
] For |
II,
88 |
sung
. . . farewell. ] sang . . . farewell: |
II,
89-160 |
In PW,
Mac’s song is given the title Farewell,
Caledonia! Throughout the song two two-stress
lines have been combined to form four-stress lines. |
II,
89 |
Farewell
] Farewell, |
II,
90 |
country
] country |
II,
91 |
every
scarred cliff, ] ev’ry scarr’d cliff |
II,
92 |
fell,
] fell. |
II,
94 |
view,
] view— |
II,
95 |
And
I . . . loved ] I . . . lov’d |
II,
97 |
does
chase ] hath chased |
II,
98 |
main
] main, |
II,
100 |
Farewell
. . . Leven, ] Farewell, . . . Leven! |
II,
101 |
Thou
] dear |
II,
103 |
part.
] part: |
II,
105 |
thatched
] thatch’d |
II,
107 |
gambolled
] gambol’d |
II,
108 |
hill;
] hill. |
II,
109 |
loved
] lov’d |
II,
110 |
rain,
] rain, |
II,
111 |
oh ]
oh! |
II,
114 |
calm,
] calm! |
II,
115 |
laverock
] lav’rock |
II,
120 |
lee;
] lea; [Page 121] |
II,
121 |
sorrow
] sorrows |
II,
123 |
heart-light
o’ ] light heart of |
II,
125 |
O ]
Oh, |
II,
126 |
cam
] cam’ |
II,
128 |
fa';
] fa’! |
II,
131 |
farewell,
my laddie, ] “Farewell, my laddie,” |
II,
132 |
a’
] all |
II,
137 |
cottage,
] cottage |
II,
138 |
friens
. . . gathered ] frien’s . . . gather’d |
II,
141 |
cam
. . . wi’ ] cam’ . . . wi |
II,
142 |
sorrowfu’
] sorrowful |
II,
144 |
a sorrowfu’
sign; ] an ominous sign: |
II,
147 |
And
] That |
II,
150 |
took,
] took |
II,
151 |
loved
] lov’d |
II,
152 |
sorrowfu'
] sorrowful |
II,
153 |
gathered
] gather’d |
II,
156 |
looked
. . . face; ] look’d . . . face, |
II,
157 |
branches,
] branches |
II,
158 |
sorrowfu’
] sorrowful |
II,
159 |
oh no,
ye’ll ] “Oh, no! ye will |
II,
160 |
again.
] again.” |
CHAPTER III. THE ARRIVAL. ] THE ARRIVAL
III,
1 |
past
] pass’d |
III,
2 |
last,
] last— |
III,
4 |
nation;
] nation— |
III,
6 |
On ]
O’er |
III,
9-10 |
And
the pine and hemlock stood, / Monarchs of the solitude,
omitted from PW. |
III,
11 |
picked
] pick’d |
III,
12 |
right
. . . wrong; ] right, . . . wrong. |
III,
13 |
day,
] day |
III,
14 |
journeyed
. . . way, ] journey’d . . . way; [Page
122] |
III,
15 |
Picked
] Pick’d |
III,
16 |
evening
fixed . . . camp; ] ev’ning fix’d .
. . camp |
III,
17 |
lovely
little spring, ] cool, refreshing spring |
III,
18 |
Murmured
. . . thing, ] Murmur’d . . . thing— |
III,
19 |
And
like charity ] Like sweet Charity, |
III,
20 |
green;
] green. |
III,
21 |
tree,
] tree |
III,
22 |
cheerfully;
] cheerfully, |
III,
23 |
made;
] made. |
III,
26 |
camped
. . . cheerfully ] camp’d . . . gleefully |
III,
27 |
rung
] rang |
III,
28 |
sung.
] sang: |
III,
29-68 |
The
song of the pioneers is entitled The Greenwood
Shade in PW. |
III,
29 |
O
come to ] Oh, seek |
III,
30 |
city’s
] city |
III,
32 |
And
the ] From |
III,
34 |
luxury
] Luxury |
III,
35 |
And
Want as she ] Where lean Want |
III,
36 |
Looks
on with her ] And stares with |
III,
37 |
From
the city with its sin, ] Flee from the city’s
sin, |
III,
38 |
And
its many coloured ] Its many-color’d |
III,
39 |
gin
] sin |
III,
40 |
And
its . . . reared ] Its . . . rear’d |
III,
42 |
never
] ne’er |
III,
43 |
Amid
. . . lank, ] ’Mid . . . lank |
III,
44 |
walls.
] walls; |
III,
45 |
festering
] fest’ring |
III,
47 |
flow,
] flow |
III,
48 |
of
the . . . bells; ] of . . . bells. |
III,
49 |
Oh!
God, I would ] O God! I’d |
III,
51 |
And
. . . the forest free, ] To . . . forest free |
III,
52 |
my
daily ] daily |
III,
53 |
O
. . . would I pursue, ] Oh! . . . I’d pursue |
III,
54 |
the
grisly ] grizzly |
III,
55 |
few,
] few |
III,
56 |
In those
. . . care; ] In . . . care. [Page 123]
|
III,
57 |
winter’s
] Winter’s |
III,
58 |
And
his . . . wan, ] His . . . wan; |
III,
59 |
what
is . . . mood, ] what’s . . . mood |
III,
61 |
To the
] To |
III,
62 |
To the
] To |
III,
63 |
O! the
. . . reconciled, ] The . . . reconciled |
III,
64 |
That
has felt oppression’s load; ] That’s
felt Oppression’s load. |
III,
67 |
light,
] light— |
III,
69 |
circled
round, ] circl’d round. |
III,
71 |
threw,
] threw |
III,
72 |
hue;
] hue— |
III,
73 |
’Twas
a scene ] Such a scene, |
III,
74 |
Salvator
. . . loved to paint; ] Rosa . . . lov’d to
paint. |
III,
75 |
But
ere long . . . oppressed ] But, ere long, . . .
opprest |
III,
76 |
rest;
] rest, |
III,
79 |
again
] again, |
III,
80 |
way;
] way, |
III,
82 |
crossing
] walking |
III,
84 |
pond
holes ] pond-holes |
III,
85 |
wandering
. . . track; ] wand’ring . . . track, |
III,
86 |
And
to find it ] Then, to find it, |
III,
88 |
Stout
hearts and ] Stout of heart, |
III,
89 |
scene,
] scene— |
III,
90 |
maple
] maples |
III,
91 |
murmured
] murmur’d |
III,
92 |
loved
the shade, ] lov'd the shade. |
III,
93 |
dye,
] dye |
III,
95 |
coloured
] color’d |
III,
96 |
songless
every one; ] songless, ev’ry one: |
III,
97 |
gray,
] grey |
III,
99 |
thrush,
] thrush |
III,
100 |
bush
] brush |
III,
102 |
between
light and dark; ] ’tween the light and dark, |
III,
104 |
herald
] herald, |
III,
105 |
wings,
] wings— |
III,
106 |
rings;
] rings— [Page 124] |
III,
109 |
But
although ] But, altho’ |
III,
110 |
there;
] there. |
III,
113 |
anon
] anon, |
III,
114 |
Paused
] Paus’d |
III,
119 |
hind,
] hind |
III,
120 |
snuffed
the wind; ] snuff’d the wind. |
III,
121 |
Kent,
] Kent |
III,
122 |
sent;
] sent. |
III,
123 |
The
creature made a desperate leap, ] Desperate did
the creature leap, |
III,
124 |
deep,
] deep; |
III,
126 |
Reeled
. . . ground; ] Reel’d, . . . ground. |
III,
127 |
made,
] made |
III,
128 |
shade,
] shade: |
III,
129 |
rush,
] rush |
III,
130 |
underbrush,
] underbrush. |
III,
131 |
quail,
] quail; |
III,
132 |
And
partridge with her ] Partridge, with their |
III,
133 |
past
. . . her brood ] past, . . . their broods |
III,
134 |
a .
. . solitude ] the . . . solitudes |
III,
137 |
o’er,
] o’er |
III,
138 |
Spattered
. . . gore, ] Spatter’d . . . gore; |
III,
141 |
She
] She, |
III,
142 |
Slaughtered
] Slaughter’d |
III,
143 |
journeyed
] journey’d |
III,
144 |
And
] And, |
III,
145 |
Hailed
. . . promised ] Hail’d . . . promis’d |
III,
147 |
way,
] way |
III,
148 |
Round
. . . still . . . bay; ] ’Round . . . still,
. . . bay. |
III,
150 |
been.
] been; |
III,
152 |
Filled
. . . art, ] Fill’d . . . art. |
III,
153 |
And
. . . trace, ] Here . . . trace |
III,
154 |
place;
] place: |
III,
155 |
does
remain, ] when we came, |
III,
156 |
feature
. . . same; ] feature, . . . same. |
III,
158 |
dropped
] dropt [Page 125] |
III,
159 |
And
] So |
CHAPTER IV.
CUTTING THE FIRST TREE. ] CUTTING THE
FIRST TREE
IV,
3 |
round
. . . lake, ] ’round . . . lake |
IV,
5 |
if it
would . . . fast ] ’twould . . . hard and
fast |
IV,
6 |
stretched
] stretch’d |
IV,
8 |
Swallowed
. . . cloud built ] Swallow’d . . . cloud-built |
IV,
11 |
wandering
. . . rear, ] wand’ring . . . rear |
IV,
12 |
drear;
] drear. |
IV,
14 |
sing;
] sing. |
IV,
15 |
duck
] duck, |
IV,
16 |
Paused,
and . . . startled ] Paus’d, and, . . . startl’d |
IV,
17 |
Called
. . . scattered . . . save, ] Call’d . . .
scattr’d . . . save— |
IV,
18 |
Then
. . . wave; ] Soon . . . wave. |
IV,
19 |
alight,
] alight |
IV,
20 |
Screamed
. . . unlooked for ] Scream’d . . . unlook’d-for |
IV,
21 |
And
. . . bewildered ] Then, . . . bewilder’d |
IV,
25 |
Showed
] Show’d |
IV,
27-28 |
We were
awkward at the axe, / And the trees were stubborn
facts; omitted from PW. |
IV,
29 |
I mind
a sturdy elm well, ] One sturdy elm I mind right
well— |
IV,
30 |
'Twas
. . . fell, ] It was . . . fell— |
IV,
31 |
I could
point you out I trow, ] I think I could point out
to you |
IV,
32 |
whereon
it grew; ] on which it grew. |
IV,
33 |
At it
we together went, ] Together soon we at it went— |
IV,
34 |
sacrament;
] sacrament, |
IV,
35 |
foundation,
] foundation |
IV,
38 |
would,
] would; |
IV,
39 |
quiver,
] quiver— |
IV,
40 |
stood
] stood, |
IV,
41 |
laboured
. . . Bill, ] labor’d . . . Bill |
IV,
42 |
still,
] still. |
IV,
43 |
sat
] sat, [Page 126] |
IV,
45 |
Oh ]
Oh! |
IV,
46 |
Turk,
] Turk! |
IV,
47 |
gloom,
] gloom |
IV,
48 |
I have
groaned . . . loom, ] Have I groan’d . . .
loom,— |
IV,
52 |
close;
] close, |
IV,
54 |
Looked
for long . . . last. ] Look’d-for-long . .
. last; |
IV,
57 |
roast—
] roast, |
IV,
59 |
power—
] pow’r, |
IV,
61 |
too,
] too,— |
IV,
63 |
That
would be a miracle, ] That a miracle would be, |
IV,
64 |
Yet
the thing is possible; ] Yet might happen possibly; |
IV,
66 |
Pope—
] Pope. |
IV,
67 |
tree!”
] tree.” |
IV,
71 |
rent
. . . start ] rent, . . . start, |
IV,
72 |
Seemed
] Seem’d |
IV,
74 |
Seemed
] Seem’d |
IV,
75 |
Swayed
] Sway’d |
IV,
76 |
go,
] go— |
IV,
79 |
came
] came, |
IV,
81 |
And
] Then |
IV,
82 |
might;
] might, |
IV,
83 |
cheered
] cheer’d, |
IV,
85 |
Then
] Soon, |
IV,
88 |
oration:—
] oration: |
IV,
90 |
These
dark ] Dark |
IV,
92 |
unknown
] unknown, |
IV,
93 |
God-commissioned
] God-commission’d |
IV,
94 |
That
howling ] This rough |
IV,
95 |
overflows
] overflows, |
IV,
96 |
rose!
] rose. |
IV,
97 |
“Trees
] Trees |
IV,
98 |
things;
] things, |
IV,
99 |
green-arched
solitudes ] green-arch’d solitudes, |
IV,
100 |
intrudes—
] intrudes, |
IV,
103 |
Sentiments
] Sentiment’s |
IV,
104 |
But,
I fear, it ] But I fear they [Page 127]
|
IV,
106 |
The
strong arm is ] But strong arms are |
IV,
107 |
determined
will ] determin’d will— |
IV,
108 |
Bill;
] Bill. |
IV,
109 |
Not
] “Not |
IV,
110 |
We will
] Shall we |
IV,
111 |
honest
. . . toil, ] honest, . . . toil |
IV,
114 |
toil
] toil, |
IV,
116 |
prize;
] prize. |
IV,
117 |
say—
] say: |
IV,
119 |
these
. . . us ] the . . . us, |
IV,
123 |
winning
] winning, |
IV,
126 |
begun,
] begun. |
IV,
127 |
Success
. . . persevering, ] Triumph . . . persevering— |
IV,
128 |
By and
bye ] By and by |
IV,
129 |
overcast,
] overcast; |
IV,
130 |
last;
] last. |
IV,
131 |
Cæsar
] Cæsar, |
IV,
134 |
stabs
] stabs, |
IV,
138 |
tree,
] tree |
IV,
140 |
dies!
] dies. |
IV,
141 |
He who’d
] Who would |
IV,
142 |
brow;
] brow. |
IV,
143 |
band,
] band |
IV,
144 |
hand,
] hand; |
IV,
145-146 |
Joying
in each others success, / Winking at each others
weakness. Omitted from PW. |
IV,
148 |
With
industry . . . temperance, ] Industry . . . temperance; |
IV,
149 |
can
be got, ] on our task |
IV,
150 |
Even
for the asking o’t ] Let us now with reverence
ask; |
IV,
151 |
And
with these ] For, with these, |
IV,
154 |
doubting,
] doubting |
IV,
156 |
Saying
. . . men, ] Said he . . . men; |
IV,
157 |
attention
] attention, |
IV,
158 |
parable:—
] parable. |
IV,
159 |
days
] days, |
IV,
160 |
filled
] fill’d [Page 128] |
IV,
161 |
retired
place, ] retirèd place |
IV,
162 |
Lived
. . . race; ] Liv’d . . . race. |
IV,
165 |
now
a days ] nowadays |
IV,
166 |
ways;
] ways. |
IV,
167 |
power
. . . man, ] pow’r . . . man |
IV,
168 |
every
thing ] ev’rything |
IV,
169 |
said
this is mine own— ] said, ‘This is mine
own’— |
IV,
171 |
lawgiver
] lawgiver, |
IV,
174 |
poor;
] poor— |
IV,
175 |
ere
] e’re |
IV,
181 |
Now
] Now, |
IV,
184 |
days,
] days: |
IV,
185 |
Every
] Ev’ry |
IV,
186 |
power
] pow’r |
IV,
187 |
rest—
] rest, |
IV,
188 |
possessed
] possest |
IV,
190 |
everywhere
] ev’rywhere |
IV,
194 |
foe
] foe, |
IV,
196 |
Devil
] devil |
IV,
198 |
He follows
skinflint’s . . . advice; ] Follow Skinflint’s
. . . advice— |
IV,
199 |
short,
] short |
IV,
200 |
“cheat
. . . cheated; ] ‘Cheat . . . cheated. |
IV,
201 |
bleathers,
] blethers; |
IV,
205 |
dodge
] dodge, |
IV,
208 |
winner:
] winner; |
IV,
209 |
But
get cash . . . it, ] So get cash, . . .
it |
IV,
210 |
it.”
] it.’ |
IV,
212 |
way:
] way, |
IV,
214 |
might
. . . woe; ] shall . . . woe. |
IV,
218 |
gold;
] gold. |
IV,
219 |
all,
and all for each ] all and all for each |
IV,
220 |
preach;
] preach. |
IV,
222 |
’Tis
. . . stands; ] (’Tis . . . stands): |
IV,
224 |
break.”
] break?” [Page 129] |
CHAPTER V. THE
LOG CABIN. ] THE LOG CABIN
V,
2 |
there;
] there. |
V, 4 |
love
] loves |
V, 5 |
red
man ] Red Man |
V, 6 |
crash,
] crash; |
V, 13 |
axe
. . . hear, ] ax . . . hear. |
V, 14 |
And
. . . cheer; ] As . . . cheer, |
V, 15 |
And
the children who once would gaze in affright, ]
The children, who first had gazed in affright |
V, 16 |
see
. . . wolf dog ] saw . . . wolf-dog |
V, 17 |
Will
. . . delight, ] Now . . . delight— |
V, 19 |
alone,
] alone; |
V, 21 |
moan;
] moan. |
V, 22 |
peace
. . . angel . . . there, ] Peace, . . . angel, .
. . there; |
V, 23 |
Hope
. . . rapt ] Hope, . . . rapt, |
V, 25 |
tassel
] tassel, |
V, 26 |
anchored
] anchor’d |
V, 28 |
cabin
] cabin, |
V, 29 |
lies
] lies, |
V, 30 |
wild
duck’s ] wild-duck’s |
V, 31 |
mew;
] mew. |
V, 32 |
fashioned
] fashion’d |
V, 33 |
noisome
] noisy |
V, 38 |
every
] ev’ry |
V, 39 |
Nought
. . . breeze, ] Naught . . . breeze |
V, 42 |
built
] built, |
V, 45 |
every
] ev’ry |
V, 46 |
away,
] away. |
V, 50 |
bore
] rose |
V, 51 |
scene,
] scene: |
V, 52 |
The
forest doffed her . . . green, ] Forests doff’d
their . . . green |
V, 54 |
Streaked
with grey ] Streak’d with gray |
V, 55 |
The
wind moaned like a thing ] Moan’d the wind
like thing |
V, 56 |
And
. . . blue bird left; ] A . . . bluebird left, |
V, 57 |
wild
fowl . . . lake, ] wild-fowl . . . lake
[Page 130] |
V, 59 |
humming
bird ] humming-bird |
V, 60 |
bore.
] bore; |
V, 61 |
And
. . . jay, ] Soon . . . jay |
V, 62 |
flowers
. . . passed ] flow’'rs . . . pass’d |
V, 63 |
nature
] Nature |
V, 64 |
heavens
] heav’ns |
V, 66 |
looked
] look’d |
V, 68 |
descended,
] descended. |
V, 69 |
And
. . . stript ] All . . . stript, |
V, 71 |
And
. . . roar, ] While . . . roar |
V, 72 |
Dashed
. . . shore; ] Dash’d . . . shore, |
V, 73 |
mood,
] mood |
V, 76 |
us;
] us. |
V, 77 |
night,
] night |
V, 79 |
dwelling,
] dwelling |
V, 80 |
yelling;
] yelling— |
V, 81 |
tramp,
] tramp |
V, 82 |
swamp;
] swamp. |
V, 83 |
looked
] look’d |
V, 84 |
bark:
] bark. |
V, 86 |
swine,
] swine |
V, 87 |
insane;
] insane, |
V, 90 |
shook;
] shook! |
V, 91 |
frightened
] frighten’d |
V, 92 |
door;
] door— |
V, 93 |
eyes,
] ire |
V, 94 |
there
like fire-flies,— ] from their eyes like fire. |
V, 98 |
breath,
] breath; |
V, 99 |
Then
above the voice of boreas, ] Then, with voices yelling
o’er us, |
V, 100 |
the
chorus; ] in chorus. |
V, 101 |
keep
] howl |
V, 103 |
winter
was ] winter’s cold was |
V, 104 |
cheery,
] cheery; |
V, 106 |
gatherings
] gath’rings |
V, 108 |
made;
] made. |
V, 111 |
stories,
] stories Lines 111 and 112 are reversed in PW.
[Page 131] |
V, 112 |
chorus:
] chorus, See previous entry. |
V, 113 |
’coon
] coon |
V, 114 |
Autumn
moon; ] autumn moon— |
V, 116 |
haul;
] haul— |
V, 118 |
Gained
but by ] Gain’d by but |
V, 120 |
song
] song; |
V, 121 |
sing;
] sing |
V, 122 |
ring.
] ring: |
V, 123-146 |
Little
Mac’s song is given the title I Ask Not
for Fortune in PW. |
V, 124 |
wealth;
] wealth, |
V, 128 |
wreathe;
] wreathe— |
V, 131 |
officious,
] officious |
V, 132 |
great;
] great, |
V, 134 |
State:
] state; |
V, 136 |
fool;
] fool, |
V, 137 |
greedy—
] greedy, |
V, 138 |
rule.
] rule, |
V, 141 |
dwelling—
] dwelling, |
V, 142 |
heart.
] heart; |
V, 144 |
wreathe;
] wreathe— |
V, 147 |
long,
] long |
V, 148 |
song;
] song, |
V, 150 |
Wooed
. . . Maid. ] Woo’d . . . maid: |
V, 151-174 |
These
lines are entitled The Indian Maid in PW. |
V, 151 |
O come
. . . O ] Oh, come, . . . Oh, |
V, 153 |
we,
] we |
V, 154 |
evening
] ev’ning |
V, 155 |
nor
] or |
V, 156 |
But
. . . afraid: ] Yet . . . afraid; |
V, 159 |
night—
] night, |
V, 160 |
dawn;
] dawn, |
V, 161 |
eye
a . . . light— ] eye is a . . . light, |
V,
162 |
pretty
] pretty, |
V,
163 |
rare—
] rare, |
V,
164 |
brocade;
] brocade, |
V,
167 |
love,
O come with me, ] love! Oh, come with me!
[Page 132] |
V,
168 |
awake,
] awake |
V,
169 |
bound
] speed |
V,
173 |
bower
. . . be— ] bow’r . . . be, |
V,
176 |
befel
] befell |
V,
177 |
unsaid—unsung—
] unsaid, unsung, |
V,
180 |
men:
] men; |
V,
181 |
rhymes—
] rimes, |
V,
182 |
times;
] times, |
V,
185 |
son
] brave son |
V,
186 |
Chevy-Chase
] Chevy Chase, |
V,
188 |
cold;
] cold, |
V,
191 |
strains
. . . art,— ] strains, . . . art, |
V,
194 |
poetry;
] poetry, |
V,
196 |
’Till
. . . rest; ] Till . . . rest. |
V,
197 |
And
] Then |
V,
200 |
King:—
] King: |
V,
201-260 |
The
title The Gipsy King is given to the ballad
in PW. |
V,
201 |
“Lord
] Lord |
V,
205 |
heaven
] heav’n |
V,
207 |
racked
] rack’d |
V,
209 |
“‘Thy
] “Thy |
V,
211 |
O ]
oh! |
V,
212 |
ween;
] ween. |
V,
213 |
crawflower
] crawflow’r |
V,
216 |
Dee.
] Dee; |
V,
217 |
“‘But
. . . bower ] “But . . . bow'r |
V,
220 |
Weir.’
] Weir.” |
V,
221 |
flowers
] flow’rs |
V,
222 |
sing,
] sing; |
V,
224 |
King!
] King. |
V,
225 |
“But
] But |
V,
227 |
off,
] off |
V,
230 |
long;
] long, |
V,
231 |
tent,
] tent |
V,
232 |
“‘You've
] “Thou'st |
V,
235 |
goes
at ] goes out at [Page 133] |
V,
236 |
King.’”
] King.’ |
V,
237 |
“‘I
] “I |
V,
240 |
thee.’”
] thee.” |
V,
241 |
“The
] The |
V,
243 |
reddens
] redd‘ns |
V,
245 |
“‘Oh!
. . . done,‘ ] “Oh, . . . done?” |
V,
248 |
King.”
] King!” |
V,
251 |
vain,
] vain |
V,
255 |
gray
] grey |
V,
257 |
points
] seeks out |
V,
259 |
Place
of Grief . . . bears, ] “Place of Grief”
. . . bears |
CHAPTER VI. THE INDIAN BATTLE. ] THE
INDIAN BATTLE
VI,
1 |
It
happened ] This happen’d |
VI,
2 |
here;
] here. |
VI,
3 |
day,
] day |
VI,
4 |
I was
] Was I |
VI,
5 |
paused
] paus’d |
VI,
6 |
see
] see, |
VI,
7 |
Some
one . . . hill. ] Someone . . . hill? |
VI,
12 |
Puff’d
. . . put ] Puffed . . . laid |
VI,
13 |
face,
] face: |
VI,
14 |
Oh!
. . . race: ] Oh, . . . race! |
VI,
15 |
Go,
oh! . . . gun— ] Go! oh, . . . gun, |
VI,
16 |
murdered
] murdered, |
VI,
17 |
All
] “All |
VI,
19 |
as thick
as pigeons, hush;— ] thick as pigeons—Hush! |
VI,
20 |
bush!
] brush! |
VI,
22 |
worried.
] worried! |
VI,
24 |
deer;
] deer! |
VI,
25 |
oh dee!
] oh, Dee, |
VI,
27 |
sword,
] sword |
VI,
32 |
alarming.
] alarming: [Page 134] |
VI,
35 |
Women,
] Women |
VI,
38 |
everywhere;
] everywhere— |
VI,
39 |
found—
] found, |
VI,
41 |
resolved
] resolv’d |
VI,
43 |
Bill,
. . . Kent, ] Bill . . . Kent |
VI,
44 |
element,)
] element), |
VI,
48 |
sword
and musket too, ] sword, and musket, too: |
VI,
49 |
general,
] gen’ral |
VI,
50 |
mood;
] mood. |
VI,
51 |
mustered
] muster’d |
VI,
52 |
ten,
] ten; |
VI,
54 |
work.
] work; |
VI,
56 |
axe
] ax, |
VI,
58 |
planned
] plann’d |
VI,
59 |
know,
] know |
VI,
61 |
Muskets
. . . front, said he, ] “Muskets . . . front!”
cried he; |
VI,
62 |
Keep
. . . me. ] “Keep . . . me!” |
VI,
63 |
Then
] Then, |
VI,
64 |
die;
] die. |
VI,
65 |
reached
] reach’d |
VI,
66 |
fight:
] fight; |
VI,
67 |
There
] Where |
VI,
68 |
wood,
] wood. |
VI,
70 |
hell,
] hell; |
VI,
71-72 |
Which
was answered by another, / From a little brushwood
cover; Omitted from PW. |
VI,
74 |
seemed
] seem’d |
VI,
75 |
steady,
] steady; |
VI,
76 |
And
at the command be ready, ] When order’s giv’n,
be ye ready. |
VI,
77 |
rear,
] rear; |
VI,
81 |
stood,
] stood |
VI,
82 |
wood;
] wood. |
VI,
83 |
passed
] pass’d |
VI,
85 |
given
] giv’n |
VI,
87 |
Then
] But |
VI,
90 |
alarm.
] alarm— [Page 135] |
VI,
91 |
array,
] array |
VI,
93 |
chiefs,
to end the quarrel, ] chieftains, fierce and cruel, |
VI,
94 |
duel;
] duel. |
VI,
95 |
These
were . . . indeed; ] This was . . . indeed! |
VI,
97 |
delight,
] delight |
VI,
100 |
tribe,
. . . stood, ] tribe . . . stood. |
VI,
101 |
windfall
of . . . green, ] windfall’s . . . green |
VI,
102 |
Formed
] Form’d |
VI,
104 |
spoken;
] spoken. |
VI,
105 |
hope,
] hope |
VI,
106 |
seemed
to cope, ] seem’d to cope. |
VI,
109 |
their
. . . shone, ] the . . . shone |
VI,
110 |
on ]
on. |
VI,
112 |
bearing,
] bearing; |
VI,
117 |
walk.
] walk; |
VI,
119 |
grasped
a knife, ] grasp’d a knife— |
VI,
120 |
stalked
] stalk’d |
VI,
121 |
seemed
] seem’d |
VI,
122 |
weight,
] might; |
VI,
124 |
length,
] length; |
VI,
128 |
gloom;
] gloom. |
VI,
129 |
walked
] walk’d |
VI,
130 |
tomahawked;
] tomahawk’d— |
VI,
131 |
savage
] savage, |
VI,
132 |
A devil
. . . one; ] Devil, . . . one, |
VI,
133 |
approached
] approach’d |
VI,
135 |
foe,
] foe |
VI,
136 |
throw;
] throw. |
VI,
137 |
seemed
] seem’d |
VI,
139 |
And
seemed ] Seem’d |
VI,
140 |
threw,
] threw. |
VI,
141 |
wheeled
. . . past ] wheel’d . . . pass’d |
VI,
143 |
Hemlock
sunk upon ] Hemlock, sinking on |
VI,
144 |
But
got ] Quick was |
VI,
145 |
I could
see ] Down his face |
VI,
146 |
From
a deep gash on his head; ] Deep the gash upon his
head. [Page 136] |
VI,
148 |
Grasped
] Grasp’d |
VI,
149 |
a pace,
] apace; |
VI,
150 |
race,
] race. |
VI,
152 |
Grappled
. . . fell, ] Grappling . . . fell. |
VI,
153 |
rolled
] roll’d |
VI,
154 |
As if
in a . . . hold, ] Clasping each in . . . hold; |
VI,
155 |
And
anon ] And, anon, |
VI,
156 |
knees,
] knees |
VI,
157 |
Still
] (Still |
VI,
158 |
Locked
. . . clasp; ] Lock’d . . . clasp); |
VI,
159 |
haunches
] haunches, |
VI,
160 |
there;
] there. |
VI,
161 |
streaming,
] streaming; |
VI,
162 |
gleaming:
] gleaming. |
VI,
163 |
amain,
] amain |
VI,
164 |
plain;
] plain. |
VI,
166 |
feet,
] feet; |
VI,
167 |
brake;
] brake, |
VI,
168 |
rattle-snake
] rattlesnake |
VI,
169 |
quick
] quick, |
VI,
170 |
heart,
] heart; |
VI,
171 |
Leaps
on him ] On him leaps |
VI,
173 |
And
] And, |
VI,
177 |
Silent
] Silent, |
VI,
178 |
Watched
] Watch’d |
VI,
179 |
Hurons
] Hurons, |
VI,
181 |
seemed
. . . crushed ] seem’d . . . crush’d |
VI,
182 |
down
. . . rushed, ] on . . . rush'd; |
VI,
183 |
Eagle
] Eagle, |
VI,
184 |
high,
] high; |
VI,
185 |
deer,
] deer |
VI,
186 |
Mohawks
hastening ] Mohawks, hast’ning |
VI,
188 |
slaughtered
. . . away, ] slaughter’d . . . away; |
VI,
189 |
unto
] into [Page 137] |
CHAPTER VII. DONALD BAN. ] DONALD BAN
VII,
1 |
here
] here, |
VII,
3 |
log
built . . . stood, ] log-built . . . stood |
VII,
4 |
ago;
] ago. |
VII,
5 |
And
he was tall and straight ] Erect he was, and tall |
VII,
7 |
him,
] him |
VII,
9 |
youth.
] youth, |
VII,
10 |
travelled
] travel’d |
VII,
11 |
stream,
] stream |
VII,
12 |
O’Groat's
to Clyde; ] o’ Groat’s to Clyde. |
VII,
13 |
loved
] lov’d |
VII,
14 |
loved
] lov’d |
VII,
15 |
daring,
] daring |
VII,
17 |
hills,
] hills |
VII,
19 |
sing,
] sing |
VII,
20 |
balladical
lore ] ballads o’er and o’er |
VII,
21 |
treasured
. . . heart, ] treasur’d . . . heart |
VII,
23 |
smiles
and ] smiles, the |
VII,
27 |
mountain
robbers’ hold, ] mountain-robber’s hold |
VII,
30 |
Renowned
. . . lay, ] Renown’d . . . lay— |
VII,
31 |
seer,
] seer |
VII,
32 |
with
him passed ] pass’d with him |
VII,
33 |
nature’s
] Nature’s |
VII,
36 |
thought;
] thought. |
VII,
37 |
deepest,
] deepest |
VII,
42 |
own,
] own— |
VII,
43 |
great
. . . there, ] grand . . . there |
VII,
44 |
throne,
] throne. |
VII,
47 |
things,
] things |
VII,
48 |
Awatching
. . . men; ] A-watching . . . men. |
VII,
49 |
grieved
to think, ] griev’d to think |
VII,
50 |
more,
] more |
VII,
52 |
Nor
Corybrechtain’s ] Or Corrybrechtan’s |
VII,
53 |
Ah,
. . . tell, ] Ah! . . . tell |
VII,
54 |
heartbreak
of thy . . . farewell, ] heart-break of your . .
. farewell? [Page 138] |
VII,
55 |
oppression’s
. . . hand, ] Oppression’s . . . hand |
VII,
56 |
thee
] you |
VII,
57 |
thee
] you |
VII,
59 |
adieu,
] adieu |
VII,
63 |
When
you saw the old roof-tree, ] Last the old roof-tree
did view, |
VII,
64 |
thee,
] you— |
VII,
65 |
Thee
. . . race, ] You . . . race, |
VII,
66 |
thy
] your |
VII,
67 |
the
tall ] beheld |
VII,
68 |
thy
honoured ] the honor’d |
VII,
69 |
Felled
. . . shame, ] Fell’d . . . shame— |
VII,
70 |
Felled
. . . flame, ] Fell’d . . . flame |
VII,
71 |
thy
] your |
VII,
72 |
thy
. . . swelling, ] your . . . swelling? |
VII,
73 |
gave,
] gave |
VII,
74 |
slave;
] slave? |
VII,
75 |
sprung,
] sprung |
VII,
76 |
tongue;
] tongue, |
VII,
77 |
deep,
] deep |
VII,
78 |
thy
. . . leap, ] your . . . leap |
VII,
79 |
day,
] day |
VII,
80 |
away;
] away, |
VII,
81 |
o’erflow,
] o’erflow |
VII,
82 |
woe.
] woe? |
VII,
83 |
eve,
] eve |
VII,
85 |
play,
] play |
VII,
86 |
’Till
] Till |
VII,
88 |
again,
] again; |
VII,
89 |
Or ]
Or, |
VII,
90 |
regret.
] regret: |
VII,
91-112 |
These
lines are given the title Why Left I My Country
in PW. |
VII,
92 |
lake,
] lake? |
VII,
93 |
deep
sigh ] rich sky |
VII,
94 |
tower
] tow’r |
VII,
96 |
Cairn-Gorm;
] Cairngorm! |
VII,
98 |
monarchs,
. . . blue, ] monarchs . . . blue; [Page
139] |
VII,
99 |
Benavin!
. . . hoar, ] Benavin!? . . . hoar |
VII,
100 |
More,
] More! |
VII,
101 |
lovely’s
] lovely |
VII,
102 |
scarred
. . . me, ] scarr’d . . . me! |
VII,
103 |
sang
] song |
VII,
104 |
wimplin’
. . . alang, ] wimpling . . . along; |
VII,
105 |
nae
auld ballad ] no old ballads |
VII,
106 |
Nae
sang . . . thae . . . rills, ] No song . . . the
. . . rills; |
VII,
107 |
auld
] old |
VII,
108 |
’Till
I’m roving . . . again; ] Till I’m roaming
. . . again. |
VII,
109 |
O ]
oh! |
VII,
110 |
turned
. . . slave, ] turn’d . . . slave; |
VII,
111 |
dishonour
] dishonor |
VII,
113 |
fate,
] fate: |
VII,
114 |
land
desolate; ] land, desolate, |
VII,
115 |
crossed
the sea, ] crost the sea |
VII,
117 |
He ]
He, |
VII,
118 |
grave;
] grave. |
VII,
120 |
Down
at Point St. Charles died, ] At Point Saint Charles
too early died, |
VII,
121 |
grave,
] grave |
VII,
122 |
St.
Lawrence ] Saint Lawrence |
VII,
123 |
last
] last, |
VII,
124 |
Heartless
. . . wandered on; ] Heartsick . . . wander’d
on. |
VII,
125 |
found,
] found |
VII,
126 |
stag
hound, ] staghound. |
VII,
129 |
mourn,
] mourn |
VII,
130 |
O’er
. . . never ] Over . . . ne’er |
VII,
131 |
wandering
] wand’ring |
VII,
132 |
He built
at . . . here, ] Built he . . . here; |
VII,
134 |
it ]
which |
VII,
136 |
peace,
] peace. |
VII,
137 |
Donald,
. . . will, ] Donald! . . . will |
VII,
138 |
still,
] still |
VII,
139 |
up,
] up |
VII,
140 |
thy
] your [Page 140] |
VII,
142 |
thee
] you |
VII,
146 |
But
. . . resigned ] But, . . . resign’d |
VII,
147 |
wandered
] wander’d |
VII,
148 |
guide;
] guide. |
VII,
149 |
arrayed,
] array’d |
VII,
150 |
pipe
. . . played; ] pipes . . . play’d. |
VII,
151 |
sound,
] sound |
VII,
152 |
round;
] round— |
VII,
153 |
seen,
] seen |
VII,
155 |
gay,
] gay |
VII,
156 |
play;
] play. |
VII,
160 |
O! .
. . him . . . know, ] Then . . . him, . . . know |
VII,
162 |
woe.
] woe? |
VII,
163 |
went,
] went |
VII,
164 |
backwood
settlement, ] backwoods settlement; |
VII,
165 |
But
] But, |
VII,
166 |
This
] Here |
VII,
167 |
Always
. . . autumn ] Always, . . . Autumn |
VII,
168 |
showers
] show’rs |
VII,
169 |
sere,
] sear |
VII,
176 |
The
loud note of his pipe we’d hear, ] Loud his
pipe’s note we could hear. |
VII,
178 |
neighbours
gathered round, ] neighbors gather’d round; |
VII,
179 |
leaped
for ] leap’d with |
VII,
180 |
boy,
] boy |
VII,
181 |
onward
. . . meet, ] onward, . . . meet |
VII,
182 |
Their
old . . . Fleet; ] Old . . . Fleet. |
VII,
183 |
tell,
] tell |
VII,
184 |
befel,
] befell |
VII,
185 |
played
] play’d |
VII,
187 |
touched
] touch’d |
VII,
190 |
remembered
long. ] remember’d long: |
VII,
190-91 |
Between
these two lines PW includes the following
two stanzas: [Page 141] |
|
Afar from the land of the mountain and heather,
An old Highland piper look’d
sad o’er the sea,
And sigh’d o’er the time when the
sound of his
chanter
Was known from the Isles to
the bank of the Dee.
And
oft, as the shades of the night would foregather,
And day was forsaking the
weary pine plains,
He sang of the hills of the dark purple heather,
The hills that so often re-echoed
his strains.
|
VII,
191 |
O ]
Oh! |
VII,
193 |
never
to look on the lofty ] more to behold the gigantic |
VII,
195 |
still
. . . lone ] still, . . . lone, |
VII,
196 |
Corybrechtan
] Corrybrechtan |
VII,
198 |
wild
] wild, |
VII,
200 |
while,
] while; |
VII,
201 |
welcomed
’tis but . . . sassenach ] welcom’d,
ah! ’tis . . . Sassenach |
VII,
202 |
heart
welcome . . . gie ] heart-welcome . . . give |
VII,
205 |
When
. . . dance . . . me, ] When, . . . dance, . . .
me |
VII,
206-07 |
Between
these two lines the following stanza appears in
PW:
How
little they know of the weight of affection
The
scattered descendants of mighty Lochiel
Still
bear in their bosom to aught that reminds them
Of
the dark purple heather and land of the Gael.
|
VII,
210-11 |
Between
these two lines the following stanza has been
inserted in PW:
And
little they know of the tie that still binds us—
A
tie which the stranger, no, never can feel—
The
love which we bear to the land left behind us,
The
wounds of our parting which never can heal.
|
VII,
211 |
still
. . . weary Atlantic ] still, . . . placid Pacific |
VII,
212 |
looked
] look’d |
VII,
213 |
lake
beach ] sea-beach, [Page 142] |
VII,
215 |
sped,
] sped |
VII,
216 |
fled;
] fled. |
VII,
218 |
Furrowed
] Furrow’d |
VII,
219 |
old,
and blind, ] old and blind |
VII,
220 |
same;
] same. |
VII,
221 |
every
day, ] ev’ry day |
VII,
222 |
away,—
] away— |
VII,
223 |
wanderings
. . . woes, ] wand’rings . . . woes |
VII,
224 |
Swiftly
drawing ] Drawing swiftly |
VII,
225 |
passed,
] pass’d |
VII,
226 |
last,
] last. |
VII,
228 |
dying,
] dying; |
VII,
229 |
With
no one ] No one near |
VII,
230 |
him;
] him: |
VII,
231 |
hound!
] hound— |
VII,
232 |
Licked
. . . hand, . . . way, ] Lick’d . . . hand
. . . way |
VII,
234 |
lay:
] lay; |
VII,
236 |
dread—
] dread; |
VII,
237 |
reverence
. . . race, ] rev’rence . . . race |
VII,
239 |
Asked
. . . eye— ] Ask’d . . . eye, |
VII,
240 |
Will
. . . die; ] “Will . . . die” |
VII,
243 |
And
he whined . . . low, ] Whining there . . . low |
VII,
245 |
down,”
] down!” |
VII,
246 |
tread,
] tread; |
VII,
248 |
near.”
] near!” |
VII,
249 |
But
] Soon |
VII,
251 |
talked
] talk’d |
VII,
252 |
rhymes;
] rimes. |
VII,
254 |
on.
] on: |
VII,
256 |
great
spirit ] Great Spirit |
VII,
257 |
More,
] More; |
VII,
258 |
Corybrechtan’s
] Corrybrechtan’s |
VII,
260 |
Bennevis
head: ] Ben Nevis’ head; |
VII,
267 |
blue,
] blue |
VII,
269 |
“The
] The |
VII,
270 |
day,
] day; [Page 143] |
VII,
271 |
Come
. . . love . . . aweary, ] Come, . . . love, . .
. aweary |
VII,
272 |
dreary,
] dreary; |
VII,
273 |
long,
] long |
VII,
276 |
St.
] Saint |
VII,
278 |
waters;
] waters. |
VII,
279 |
staff,
. . . away, ] staff! . . . away |
VII,
280 |
gray
] grey |
VII,
281 |
roam,
] roam |
VII,
282 |
“native
Highland home.” ] native ‘Highland home.’” |
VII,
283 |
seemed
] seem’d |
VII,
285 |
passed
] pass’d |
VII,
287 |
thy
] your |
VII,
288 |
may’st
thou slumber, ] may you slumber. |
VII,
289 |
And
thy little tragedy, ] Your life’s little tragedy |
VII,
290 |
Will
. . . away; ] Shall . . . away, |
VII,
291 |
even
in thee, ] indeed, in thee |
VII,
292 |
divinity.
] divinity, |
VII,
295 |
O! thy
. . . thy ] And your . . . your |
VII,
296 |
grand,
] grand. |
VII,
297 |
between,
] between |
VII,
298 |
green:
] green; |
VII,
299 |
flowers
. . . fair, ] flow’rs, . . . fair— |
VII,
300 |
Flowers
. . . where ] Flow’rs . . . where— |
VII,
302 |
midst
. . . thunder shock ] ’midst . . . thunder-shock |
VII,
303 |
Then
the rainbow gleams ] Had its rainbow-gleams |
VII,
307 |
told,
] told |
VII,
308 |
those
. . . old, ] these . . . old— |
VII,
309 |
days,
] days |
VII,
310 |
ways;
] ways— |
VII,
311 |
quacks
] quacks, |
VII,
312 |
flocked
to . . . settlement; ] flock’d into . . .
settlement— |
VII,
314 |
Speculators
. . . jobbers; ] Speculators, . . . jobbers— |
VII,
322 |
rest,
] rest. |
VII,
323 |
fail,
] fail [Page 144] |
|